Friday 31 December 2010

If you’re happy and you know it

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The branch cracked but Matt and Helen clung on above the lions.

‘I told—’

Matt interrupted. ‘Something ‘ll save you.’

Helen, tired of his happy clappy crap, swung back to the tree to kick him,  just as the branch broke.

Matt as he fall, shouted back. ‘See.’

Helen made a tradition of never dating optimists.

Random Word: Traditions


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11 comments:

  1. hehe...well at this rate she wont have to worry about it...lol. nice 55.

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  2. dynamic writing,
    amazing 55,
    have a winsome 2011.

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  3. Most excellent John!
    Thank you so much for your support
    Have a Kick Ass 2011

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  4. @Jingle And you, thanks for all the poetry invites

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  5. @G-Man Thanks and you must be gearing up for New Year as I type!

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  6. I'd lost my link for you and today I found it!

    I'm late but this was worth it...great last line!

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.