Describing your life (or something) on at the moment of writing on a Saturday in a phrase using just six words.
Learning too much ‘ing’ is bad! **
**The overuse of participle phrase( the adding of ing to words: fidgeting, considering, flopping ) is best avoided by turning the phrases into their own sentences. As when overused they create a clickety-clack rhythm to your prose. This is a bad thing unless you want the effect when it becomes a good thing. Do you know how many can creep into a 5000 word story? Just give thanks that you don’t. Now only ten more pages to go and then it’s a review of each individual sentence construction for its punch and cadence. Editing, so much fun that it’s a secret.
So interestING I had to keep on readING until the endING!
ReplyDeleteHappy 6WS & have a great weekend!
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Great six words. Have a great 6WS.
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SO TRUE!
ReplyDeleteAs I learn English as a third language...I used to use a lot of ing...LOL
Great 6WS!
Mine is here
Happy Weekend!
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Happy SWS! Not only does that stand for Six Word Saturday, but Sentences With Song, as well. I like 'em! LOL! "The overuse of participle phrase( the adding of ing to words: fidgeting, considering, flopping ) is best avoided by turning the phrases into their own sentences. As when overused they create a clickety-clack rhythm to your prose." <--Minus the clickety-clacky? Now what fun would that be? (I am also partial to the sound of the Good 'n Plenty train making it's way down the tracks. Fuse-on sentences happen to be my life, too. I'm pretty certain that someday, the Editor Police are going to come and get me. I just know it.)
ReplyDeleteI never really paid attention but thanks to this, I'll probably pay attention now...LOL!
ReplyDeleteHappy SWS and have a wonderful weekend!!
Wow! I am thinking about it as I'm typing!
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