Friday 2 April 2010

55-Friday Flash Fiction #2

limo[10]‘I’m not sure. It’s kinda tacky to do it like this.’
‘What’s wrong with a stretch limo, you can fit the band in.’
‘Well…do we have to have the topless driver, she’s a wobbler.’
‘Duh-ta-duh, it’s for Duke’.
‘But do you think that Duke would want his funeral this way?’
Hello. He was a biker!’

Think you can write a story in 55 words? Go visit the G-man to see those who did.


26 comments:

  1. Aren't they all "wobblers"?

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  2. you only go once, might as well make it fun. smiles. nice 55.

    mine is uP!

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  3. Would anyone even notice a topless driver?

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  4. Wobbler? Too darned funny. Sorry, no disrespect for the "Duke" tho. LOLOL

    Mine is posted HERE. As always, scroll down below my Friday Show n Tell to find my 55.

    Have a great holiday weekend.

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  5. waves @ Sherry not like that girl!

    waves @ Brian Miller well I want my mourners to dress up as in this Queen video I want to be free. and lipsync dancing around the church

    waves @ stan ski not with that bike!
    waves @ changnoi isn't it

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  6. What a truly inspiring post, Ha ha ha…I say if you have to go why not go out in style!

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  7. That's some vehicle!
    And a 55 to suit, though I didn't realise it was a hearse until the end.

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  8. Where the hell did you get that snapshot? I hope everyone parties down at my wake. "It took a funeral to make me fell alive!"

    Yeah, and if you're topless you're gonna wobble. Unless you're flat as the road.

    A great 55! Thanks for droppin in on my blog.

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  9. that's a beautiful inspiration,
    yes,
    everyone has to go eventually,
    why not go easily and happily?
    thank you for the fun!

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  10. "wobbler" that's funny.

    I think the biker would be very happy.

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  11. Looks like the imagination needs stretching here to match the limo...

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  12. That's the right send off! lol - This is a fun 55.

    My 55 is here if you'd like to read.

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  13. waves @ janna yes let's party

    waves @ peter hearse is for the end, yes I agree :-)

    waves @ Yvonne gentleman never reveals what wobbled when or his sources

    waves @ jingleyanqiu he's in the big car park in the sky

    waves @ Nessa I bet he like his wobbles

    waves @ jinksy yes he needs to lighten up.

    waves @ GM ee, it were like

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  14. Haha I like the twist...you don't realise it's a funeral till the end. A good send-off :)

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  15. Sounds like a hell of a send off! A terrific 55, John!

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  16. Excellent follow-up to G-Man's post, too...

    If we don't share the road, there's an abrupt ending to the beginning.

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  17. "she's a wobbler" LOL loved it. What a send off. Very clever. Happy Easter to you and your family :)

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  18. What a way to leave this worldly misery Eh?
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Sort of what I was posting about.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Happy Easter and a Kick ass Week-End...G

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  19. I hope that I can go out like that!

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  20. LOL. This goes great with the picture from the previous post. I could see the chauffeur in body paint.

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  21. You can get away with topless with a machine like that right behind--and under--you! That was fun.

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  22. Oh, my. Oh, my. What a send off! Of course, Duke would want his funeral that way. D

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  23. @ Aoife.Troxel its what he would have liked!

    @ Felicitas its the best for the best.

    @ Titanium yep, you have to stop when the bike stops or its the great rally in the sky!

    @ Thom not that a gentleman would notice...

    @ g-man glad to have taken part

    @ otin well...

    @ Alice Audrey ooh yes, all in silver to match the chrome

    @ SandyCarlson I mean who would notice?

    @ Donnetta Lee A friend of Duke's is a friend of mine!

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  24. When your name is Duke, you like wobbler's. And if you have wobbler's your going to have a Buzzard or two hanging around, I promise.

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  25. Hey, to each his own...why not go out with a smile? :)

    Happy Easter!

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.