John, it sure feels good to find you write poetry too. I am linking this blog ith my poetry one.
This senryu hits the bulls eye.
I used to write a lot of senryu and haiku but gave it up becos I found I couldn't write longer pieces any more. Have you ever tried American sentences? 17 syllables one line poems. I have written a cuople of poems consisting of interconneted american sentences. Those stand alone too.
So witty!
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John, it sure feels good to find you write poetry too. I am linking this blog ith my poetry one.
ReplyDeleteThis senryu hits the bulls eye.
I used to write a lot of senryu and haiku but gave it up becos I found I couldn't write longer pieces any more. Have you ever tried American sentences? 17 syllables one line poems. I have written a cuople of poems consisting of interconneted american sentences. Those stand alone too.
This not only funny. It's realistic!
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