Bill shivered seeing the advert, it was his little secret. They hadn’t wanted women even for the shoot that's how he came to love lipstick.
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That was fun. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteOh, good one, John!! I love it! Thanks for your visit and no, they didn't fall in love -- he was, but he wasn't man enough for her -- in her eyes! Have a great week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Funny one, mine is along the same lines.
ReplyDeleteShe is really a he! Like minds!
I don't know if I want to make a comment, We thought along the same lines. Off to read Peggy's.
ReplyDeleteMost excellent! I'd enter as well, but I'm waaaaayyyyy to long-winded...
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteNice twist on that one!
ReplyDeleteWell done. I love this. Too funny :)
ReplyDeleteLove the take you have on this one.
ReplyDeleteLove the twist, good play there.
ReplyDelete'Hadn't wanted women even for the shoot' - now there's a line! Poor Bill! I can't help but notice his shirt ties are at a jaunty angle there -- yep!
ReplyDeletebrilliant!
ReplyDeletefunny in a bittersweet way - love it!
ReplyDeleteFunny! :)
ReplyDeleteNow THAT explains a lot about that poster pin-up. :)
ReplyDeleteNice job!
LOL! That's why his mother's lipstick keeps disappearing. She thinks she's losing her mind. Should I tell her?
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