Sunday 19 December 2010

Girls that tease

140 Character story or poem meme thanks to Susan at Stony River
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31 comments:

  1. From the look on her face, I think the pig might be a bit stinky too.
    LOL

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  2. Yep, nothing like a stinky pig for Christmas!! Hope you have a great week, a non-stinky pig and a terrific Merry Christmas!

    Sylvia

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  3. Sometimes life is tougher than we imagine. :)

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  4. Love these inner thoughts! A clever way to micro in bubbles!

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  5. Love the way you staged your story.
    Like a comic strip...
    and just add a stinky pig, wonderful.
    Happy Holidays my friend!

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  6. She does look a little snooty. Perhaps she'll get her come-uppance when she comes in last place in Trivial Pursuit.

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  7. It looks like a great vintage postcard! :O)

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  8. Playing hard to get! It often works!

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  9. She might find out someday the Pig has more class than she will ever see. Nice one John, liked the way you put the thoughts like a Comic Book. Nicely done.

    A Merry Christmas is wished for you and yours.

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  10. I love this! Very creative (and funny) approach this week!

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  11. very funny I liked the way you show they're negative thinking in the midst of Christmas spirit.

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  12. @hope especially when they smile ready to back stab!

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  13. @Sylvia K Hmmm, slow roasted and a merry Christmas to you too

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  14. @Greyscale Territory Yes just discovered how to do this and it works fine for these micro stories and for combining poetry with images

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  15. @Pat Oh nm that's what I do - no nuffin about sports and Filmstars

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  16. @Peggy Yes I'm loving creating these post card stories

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  17. @Diane Yes loving the effects that you can do via Microsoft publisher

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  18. @Bill ~ {The Old Fart} Well them with their nose n the air, cant see what they tread on..And yes Seasonal greetings as well

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  19. @Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape That's what was going for - showing what the Christmas characters are really thinking

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  20. @Susan Fobes Thanks I like this combination of story and card so will be using it more

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  21. SO sad when the inner thoughts can't be nice for even one day!

    I love the way you incorporate the words into the artwork!

    Merry Christmas!

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  22. Don't you just hate it when a woman thinks she is 'god's gift to man'....let's hope the poor guy at least gets a kiss...after all, carrying a pig can't be easy.
    Have a great holiday. Cheers!

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  23. Very creative! Great take on the prompt!

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  24. Great idea, putting the story into the picture.

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  25. Girls are like that these days. You give them a pig and get nothing in return!

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.