Tuesday 27 July 2010

A Summer’s walk

walking


 

leaves flutter
to curl crisp yellow
for my feet
to whisper through
as the breeze cools

 

 

 

 

Random Word: Walkies


15 comments:

  1. Your poem is lovely; I want to go to there!

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  2. smiles. i can feel that wind like a fresh breath...nice. thanks for linking up to one shot!

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  3. For my feet to whisper through. Oh yes, that line is like a fresh new breeze through my mind. Lovely! :)

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  4. Sounds like an idyllic place. Makes me want to be there.

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  5. refreshing lines. thanks :)

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  6. nice picture--warm words.

    smiles,

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  7. Fantastic imagery. "for my feet / to whisper through", great lines.

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  8. Please take me there, awesome work my friend ~ Amanda

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  9. I can feel the crunch of the leaves and hear the whisper of the breeze - delightful.

    so glad you joined us for One Shot Wednesday

    Moon smiles

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  10. i love yellow leaves .. same i loved this :)

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  11. hi, been away for a week and catching up with all the wonderful posts at one shot..i walked that walk with you..so very well said..cheers Pete

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.