Friday 2 July 2010

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 On a Cloud

‘Adnan sits on a cloud sorta bored - you can only see so many empires rise and fall.’

‘Where’s the Bristol's? Feels like a pufa’s film.’

‘He, ahem, becomes a mortal and falls for a poodle trainer.’

‘Poodles?’

‘The big ones that fight lions.’

‘Jocuronomous!’

Alan got the feeling that his pitch was in flames.

 

 

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17 comments:

  1. Ah, it can be a dog's life.
    Enjoyed that,

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  2. haha. nicely done 55...
    and a neat pic...
    mine is up...

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  3. Ah, you know what they say about idle hands. There's gonna be Hell to pay.

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  4. Poodles a re vicious. Sounds very exciting.

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  5. Scary poodles? Nah. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .

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  6. Excellent 55 my friend. Poodles huh? Have a great weekend :)

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  7. lol at what you wrote and love the picture.
    Thanks for stopping by and leaving your commentI appreciate it.
    Larry "This Blog Of Mine"

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  8. 'The big ones that fight lions' yup
    that was me years ago, but then the battle scars got to me!
    thanks for visiting, like your 55-

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  9. It's so hard to come up with a good pilot episode.

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  10. Poodles are usually in the top ten breeds that bite humans, ya gotta watch em!
    Excellent 55 John..
    Thanks for contributing today Brother, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!

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  11. I think a movie about lion-eating poodles is a great idea. ;)


    Losing Mikey

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  12. That's funny! And sadly, it probably would sell to Hollyweird.

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  13. Poodles that fight lions? Woah, gotta to get me one of those.
    Great pic for the piece too.

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  14. It is so much fun to see the entertaining 55s that are created by this bunch!! Your is no exception.

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  15. Some of those poodles are huge! :0

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.