Monday 14 June 2010

To have and to hold...

Before and After

 

Jane’s death was her first gift. It ended the pain of seeing a body so shrank that a soul gasped for breath.  Later, as his addiction to junk-food ended, he realised her second gift. Jane's final words, ‘I love you like warm donuts,’ had made a pain of his pleasure.

 Random Words: Warm Donuts

 


1 comment:

  1. short, concise and brilliant.
    many voices in our heads from parent, lover, spouse, friend, spur unconsious beliefs

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.