Friday, 11 June 2010

Scientific precision

Visitto do your own 55!

Professor‘It is…how you say…the tree of youth.’ Professor Korzgy felt moved to tears. His last emotion before the bullet killed him.

‘Sorry old chap.’ Lord Rundles bit into the plucked apple but vomited and fall down dead.

Wiping the sick away, Professor Korzgy, said, ‘Apologies, it is…a tree of life’.

Random Word: Gardening


15 comments:

  1. how twisty a turn between these two...nice 55...

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  2. Youth, life, death in a short 55 words.

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  3. how clever is this?
    brilliant!
    love it..
    hugs
    shakira

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  4. Sounds more like the tree of death than the tree of life.

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  5. Nicely done. A deadly tree of life, I think.

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  6. very ironic little tale of 55 words here. i think you may be channeling a little bit of poe in this one.

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  7. A tree of life for at least one of them! Have a greet weekend!

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  8. Did you have to mention Vomit?
    Irony abounds this week..hehehehe
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your fantastic support of others today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  9. A fascinating 55. Very creative and clever.

    PG

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  10. I love a mystery with an unexpected ending. You have a unique way of capturing the reader as you spin a great 55!

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  11. Great Hammer blow - love the characters names.

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  12. dear watson--he should have ducked..great 55!

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  13. A double entendre in a duplicitous event...

    Ha!
    thanks for visiting my site.
    I can't write nearly as much as I'd like,

    a dichotomy of my life
    Dianne

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  14. creative and astounding 55.

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.