Friday, 11 June 2010

Scientific precision

Visitto do your own 55!

Professor‘It is…how you say…the tree of youth.’ Professor Korzgy felt moved to tears. His last emotion before the bullet killed him.

‘Sorry old chap.’ Lord Rundles bit into the plucked apple but vomited and fall down dead.

Wiping the sick away, Professor Korzgy, said, ‘Apologies, it is…a tree of life’.

Random Word: Gardening

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15 comments:

  1. Brian Miller11 June 2010 at 16:59

    how twisty a turn between these two...nice 55...

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  2. Monkey Man11 June 2010 at 17:08

    Youth, life, death in a short 55 words.

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  3. Unknown11 June 2010 at 18:01

    how clever is this?
    brilliant!
    love it..
    hugs
    shakira

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  4. Anonymous11 June 2010 at 18:10

    Sounds more like the tree of death than the tree of life.

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  5. anthonynorth11 June 2010 at 18:21

    Nicely done. A deadly tree of life, I think.

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  6. Nessa11 June 2010 at 19:03

    Oo, a fake out. Nice.

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  7. clean and crazy11 June 2010 at 19:35

    very ironic little tale of 55 words here. i think you may be channeling a little bit of poe in this one.

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  8. drybottomgirl11 June 2010 at 21:10

    A tree of life for at least one of them! Have a greet weekend!

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  9. G-Man11 June 2010 at 21:33

    Did you have to mention Vomit?
    Irony abounds this week..hehehehe
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for your fantastic support of others today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  10. One Prayer Girl11 June 2010 at 22:15

    A fascinating 55. Very creative and clever.

    PG

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  11. showme11 June 2010 at 22:26

    I love a mystery with an unexpected ending. You have a unique way of capturing the reader as you spin a great 55!

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  12. Stan Ski12 June 2010 at 02:15

    Great Hammer blow - love the characters names.

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  13. C.M. Jackson12 June 2010 at 04:08

    dear watson--he should have ducked..great 55!

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  14. Dianne12 June 2010 at 06:17

    A double entendre in a duplicitous event...

    Ha!
    thanks for visiting my site.
    I can't write nearly as much as I'd like,

    a dichotomy of my life
    Dianne

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall12 June 2010 at 21:29

    creative and astounding 55.

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.

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