Tuesday, 29 June 2010

he had me at hello

Confused loveI thought it was love
as my spine tingled tangled
at your finger touch
yet you walked on by and brushed
red lips that had once kissed mine

I stared back at her
a patch plastered on the crack
that would bring you back
but you never called again
to see why I hugged you tight

 

Random Word: Patch

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1 comment:

  1. Dianne29 June 2010 at 16:33

    wow, you had me with the first line. I love the pain in the plaster on the crack, and the SOUND of it.

    well done.
    Dianne

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