Friday, 4 June 2010

The best day of your life

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Ajab, ignored the wedding broker. ‘Dad, are you sure they was inviting us?’

His father held the wheel tightly, looking straight ahead,‘We are going, so isn't it?’

‘But why goods, isn’t it us who gets the dowry?’

The wedding broker interrupted, ‘We discussed…and to shift you…an incentive we need. This is the deposit.’

 

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17 comments:

  1. Brian Miller4 June 2010 at 10:42

    hmm...wonder what it is about him that would require an incentive to be paid....nice 55.

    mine is up!

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  2. Stan Ski4 June 2010 at 10:45

    That's just the deposit...?
    Great 55!

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  3. Anonymous4 June 2010 at 11:19

    Oh my! Clever one this.

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  4. anthonynorth4 June 2010 at 11:28

    I like it. Enjoyed that.

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  5. magiceye4 June 2010 at 11:36

    :) great one!

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  6. A Daft Scots Lass4 June 2010 at 11:38

    nice one....thanx for visiting my wee blog.

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall4 June 2010 at 11:56

    awesome 55.

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  8. C.M. Jackson4 June 2010 at 13:53

    great photo and flash 55 -thanks for dropping by! Happy Friday!

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  9. Nessa4 June 2010 at 13:53

    Very funny. His family will go broke.

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  10. G-Man4 June 2010 at 14:14

    There is obviously some underlying issues somewhere eh?
    Excellent 55 my Friend.
    Thanks for playing today, and also thanks for supporting so many of the other contributors...You Rock.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  11. Anonymous4 June 2010 at 15:05

    If the deposit is enough to give them a flat tire, what will the final payment be like?

    Great 55.

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  12. moondustwriter4 June 2010 at 16:20

    what a catch!!!

    thanks for popping by
    Have a G-Man style weekend :)

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  13. Monkey Man4 June 2010 at 17:42

    Dude must not be much to look at let alone be around. Great 55. Thanks for stopping by to read mine.

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  14. Anonymous4 June 2010 at 21:09

    This is excellent my friend. :) What a deposit. :) Have a great weekend :)

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  15. The Silver Fox4 June 2010 at 23:57

    Yup, I'm definitely in the wrong business!

    Thanks for visiting mine!

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  16. Susan at Stony River5 June 2010 at 04:36

    Aaawww.... poor Dad! How stinky IS that boy?
    ROFL!!

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  17. RNSANE6 June 2010 at 15:59

    The parents must be REALLY desparate to get rid of that child!! What a hysterical photo!

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