Friday, 23 April 2010

Peggy Sue's out loving

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Woman climing outHer destination was a brown eyed handsome man, a man with class, a man who’d knew how to treat a lady right. Or that what’s mama wanted. Mama always wanted the best, her best and you leaned into the wind. It got you through the day. But at night, it weren’t eyes you looked for.

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20 comments:

  1. Brian Miller23 April 2010 at 11:08

    whew. i read this through the eyes of a child...and i wonder what watching mama let behind all these years later. tight 55.

    mine is up!

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  2. anthonynorth23 April 2010 at 11:24

    This was clever. loved it.

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  3. PattiKen23 April 2010 at 13:18

    O-o-oh, Peg-gy. oh, Peggy Su-u-ue! Sneakin' out at night. Tsk tsk. Good job!

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  4. Enchanted Oak23 April 2010 at 14:24

    Oh! There's something devious about this. Nice work, my friend.

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall23 April 2010 at 14:27

    witty words,
    full of wonders and insights.

    thank you for signing up in my new blog,
    hope to see you feedback on my 55.


    Greetings!

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  6. Peter Stone23 April 2010 at 14:32

    Mama always wanted her best, not Peggy's best, the poor thing. Great 55.

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall23 April 2010 at 14:44

    I spy words

    right, night, eyed, which implies lyrics...

    have fun!

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  8. järnebrand23 April 2010 at 14:50

    There is man, man, man...
    and then there's mama, mama, and her best...
    and then there's the wind... the day and the night... and the eyes...
    Some powerful stuff here as far as lyrics goes...
    ...Also I'd love to have those legs...
    Well crafted 55. /Jo.

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  9. lime23 April 2010 at 14:55

    so did you and g-man collaborate this week or is it coincidence?

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  10. Unknown23 April 2010 at 14:56

    a lot of mystery and passion in this..well done!
    Mine is here

    Have a FANTASTIC FRIDAY now!
    hugs
    shakira

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  11. Kristine23 April 2010 at 16:26

    oops just like my mom. haha. 'at night, it's not the eyes she looked for'. guess she was into blue eyes then.
    cool one.

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  12. steveroni23 April 2010 at 17:06

    "MY MOMMA DONE TOLD ME...(WHAM!)...
    WHEN I WAS IN PIGTAILS (WHAM!) Etc."

    Love those "Mamma" stories.

    Also, I thought of, "The Girl That I Marry Will Have To Be....an she'll purr like a kitten..."

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  13. Anonymous23 April 2010 at 18:15

    Very well written. Clever, Witty. Great 55 :) Have a great weekend :)

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  14. G-Man23 April 2010 at 18:21

    It seems like Ole Buddy inspired a couple of folks today eh?
    Excellent 55 My friend.
    Thank you for this great visual and contribution, You Rock.
    Thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  15. SandyCarlson23 April 2010 at 21:27

    I hear the music, imagine the intrigue!

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  16. Buzzard23 April 2010 at 22:04

    Doesn't sound like a mama's girl to me.

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  17. Me24 April 2010 at 05:25

    Ha...that was great!
    Thanks for commenting on mine, too. :)

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  18. Sheri24 April 2010 at 09:03

    thanks for the comment-and i have a feeling you'll get over my repetions...until next april when hubby and i take another trip round the birthday cake ;) i promise that, if you choose to return, i'll be whining about something totally different, heh heh!
    i loved your 55, what a nut but oh-so-true!

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall24 April 2010 at 15:31

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/04/sunshine-brightens-ones-day-award-and.html

    two awards from my blogger account.
    Happy Saturday!

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  20. moondustwriter24 April 2010 at 18:40

    Like your 55 and the photo. Yes that girl had a notion in her head (or two)

    get a chance my 55 is at http://moondustwriter.com

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