Friday, 26 March 2010

55 Friday Flash Fiction #1

throat

‘I sit and watch the phone. It is the ring-tone; it radiates my teeth so I watch for flashing. When it does, I do not answer because—’
           ‘I'm sorry but do I know you?’
           ‘It is your phone that rings, when I'm alone and you want—’
           ‘I think you better—’
           ‘This will stop you.’
           ‘Screammmmmmmmmmmmmm’

Think you can write a story in 55 words? Go visit the G-man to see those who did.

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15 comments:

  1. Brian Miller26 March 2010 at 20:11

    wow. intense 55...

    mine is up...

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  2. Anonymous26 March 2010 at 20:30

    Eeeek! A very chilling 55.

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  3. PattiKen26 March 2010 at 20:38

    Oh, no, cell phone torture! It was only a matter of time.

    Very creepy.

    I’m up here.

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  4. One Prayer Girl26 March 2010 at 21:15

    First, welcome to my blog. Thanks for leaving a comment. I love meeting new bloggers.

    Yes, your 55 was pretty intense, chilling, and creepy as others have said. Loved it. :)

    PG

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  5. Stan Ski26 March 2010 at 23:39

    I can't believe how many wrong numbers I get when it's such a simple task to store the number they actually wanted.

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  6. Buzzard27 March 2010 at 00:41

    That's exactly the reason I try to avoid phones. Someone thinks you should communicate.

    By the way this phone conversation is being recorded for quality purposes.

    Screammmmmming

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  7. Changnoi27 March 2010 at 01:01

    He's no longer mobile!

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  8. Felicitas27 March 2010 at 01:45

    A chilling 55! I'm not a fan of the telephone either.

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  9. G-Man27 March 2010 at 01:58

    Yes, a bit macabre.
    But thats what makes it YOURS!!!
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    I hope you had fun with this because it ROCKED!
    Thanks for visiting others today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  10. Enchanted Oak27 March 2010 at 02:14

    I'm with Prayer Girl. This was spine tingling and well done. Thank you for stopping by my place.

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  11. Yvonne Osborne27 March 2010 at 02:20

    Good and chilling. Sitting and waiting and watching. Yikes. Cell phones radiating teeth? Yeah...I can feel that.

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall27 March 2010 at 04:23

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/25/flash-friday-55-i-am-a-jolly-blogger/

    mine is here,
    hope that you enjoy the time visiting my blog when you are free!

    take good care,
    you rock!

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  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall27 March 2010 at 04:23

    loved it very much,
    I admire your style!
    ;)

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  14. Mona27 March 2010 at 04:43

    Its a thriller!

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  15. Margaret28 March 2014 at 16:19

    'tis why I often put mine on silent (or turn it off completely)

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.

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