Saturday 20 September 2008

Family secrets


The family of little feet


The family of little feet smiled more
in times gone past.
If truth be told they now were sore.
The family of little feet smiled more
when mother cried at bolted door.
Private fears, now public tears at last.
The family of little feet smiled more
in times gone past.

1 comment:

  1. Triolet

    A French Form

    This must be the simplest of the French forms, and therefore makes a good introduction to formal poetry. It uses only two rhymes in its eight lines, and does not have a fixed metre. The first two lines are used again as the last two lines and the first line also re-appears as the fourth. Showing the repeated lines in capitals, the rhyme scheme used in ABaAabAB.

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