Friday, 20 December 2013

But don't forget who's takin' you home

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Wearing the silver swirly skirt, brought on a champagne fuelled weekend in the '80's, she walked out barefoot.  Sitting on the window ledges, her boys cheered as Sweet Dreams (Are Made of This) got louder. Will, in Don Johnson jacket and stubble, reached up to her and got ready to dance for the last time.

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6 comments:

  1. G-Man20 December 2013 at 14:39

    Yeah Buddy, theres a captured in time moment.
    Annie Lennox and Sonny Crockett
    Loved your nostalgic 55
    Thanks for playing and sharing, please have a Kick Ass Week-End and Holiday

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  2. Kerry O'Connor20 December 2013 at 15:01

    I love all the details you packed into your 55 words.

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  3. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost 20 December 2013 at 22:49

    My 80's were more a headbanging blur through a haze of pot smoke, but I can picture a scene like this as if it was yesterday!

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This blog was inspired by First 50 words where you freewrite from a single word prompt. I use random words or images to create flash fiction in formats ranging from twitter postcards to short short stories.

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