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Julie smiled and looked away, 'Isn't the sun glorious!'
Mary said, 'Your baby's adorable' but thought, Slut...mine's died. Showing nothing she said, 'Is she sleeping through the night yet?'
Torn from my belly in pieces.
Julie said, 'Sadly no' and made her excuses to leave.
Waving, Mary watched the pram pushed away...that baby is mine.
Yeah....
ReplyDeleteThis was an upbeat and bouncy little yarn.
More suited for Halloween, but I guess there is no season
for the Macabre.
Most excellent tale of hate and jealousy
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
You never know when the dark side will call!
DeleteOuch. This is raw and difficult. But I like the scribblings that take us aback and make us think. Oh...all the words in our head we would never speak.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I was aiming for dark!
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