Sunday, 7 September 2008

Things to be done better


When I meet strangers
grown camouflage leaves laughter

but inside I die.

2 comments:

  1. I really like that one. Thanks for participating in my
    latest poetry prompt.

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  2. slick haiku. :) excellent, excellent second line.

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